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So what do you guys think of the first installment of Jonah Hex? Was there anything that you liked more? Is there anything that I can improve on to make it sound better? I'm always one for constructive critisism, so have at it. I'm not scared.

On a personal note. I feel really honored that I was asked to do this show. It makes me feel like I'm one of the "guys" and being a woman in a male dominated field, that makes me feel pretty good. Cool That being said, I want to be as good as my counterparts, but I can't do that without some feedback.

Thanks for listening. Smile


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 Question So what do ya think about Episode 1 
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The gunfight scene at the beginning had too many horse sounds. Sounded like they were shooting the horses when in fact it was just the one that Jonah shot (I know this because I read the comic and scripted the damn show LOL).

Some of the pacing in the dialogue coulda been picked up a bit, though it was more the actors than anything you did. Keeping the quiet times as short as possible helps a LOT with pacing.

Other than that, it was fantastic! A VERY good effort for a first-time. Can't wait to hear the other two!

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